Review of ‘the amazing adventure of Mark and Liz’ While reading the story, the only thing that appeared in my mind was ‘what a masterpiece it will be’. The adventure story takes you actually on a trip. The story begins with Liz and Mark. Both of them have blue sparkly eyes and share a journey on a boat. The writer has paid attention to every aspect of ruling a country efficiently. I am amazed to see how the writer has written every character in depth. I didn’t feel any barrier to imagining them. Indeed, while reading the story, I felt myself lost several times. No doubt, the writer has described everything beautifully. The selection of words is perfect. The story showcases the imaginary thoughts of the writer. Writing your thoughts with such detail is nothing less than magic. It takes a lot of effort. Not everyone can remember and write the emotions with such authenticity.
The amazing adventures of the dreamer Dear Author! Thank you for the amazing story. Here comes another part of the adventure tale. He begins with a scene where Robert is sleeping mumbling some words. His sister gets anxious and tries to wake him up but instead, he wants her to write the amazing journey that he was enjoying that moment. The dream is all about a trip where eventually he is going to find a treasure. Well, I liked the way the author included everything about the scenery in the story. The plot is perfect. I didn’t see any flaw in it. I liked the way you wrote down the whole story. It felt like even the author was enjoying while writing that dream. I guess, it is because the author is pretty passionate about it. I can see the author’s passion for writing through writing style. Until reaching, the writing has become much more improved and it gets more interesting. I loved the way how his characters are performing expressively. They are not losing any thread. Whether it is the character Alfred or Robert, both have looked adorable. Besides that, their chemistry is also beyond appreciation. It might be difficult for them to even survive without unity. I liked the whole dream like I was traveling with them. The moment when they found their treasure, you woke my inner child who always wanted to steal some treasure. So, I guess, it was my favorite part. From Author’s perspective FIRST IMPRESSION - What was my overall take on the chapter after reading it? I loved it. This is all I have to say for now. The readers are going to love this adventure dream for sure. SENSITIVITY - Is there anything that offended you in any way? Nope, it didn’t include any offensive stuff.
The wonderful voyages of Dan the Boy Flyer Dear Author! Thank you for the amazing story. Here comes another part of the adventure tale. Dan, a boy of 13 got an amazing flying belt coming to the Bahamas Islands he got a ring from a magician which enabled him to be transferred to the past. He used the ring and his amazing inner voices to help famous people from the past explorers like Columbus, Vasco da Gama, and many more, famous people like Hannibal He begins with a scene by meeting a boy on one of the Bahamas Islands who leads him to a magician, who gives him a magic ring that could transfer him into the past by uttering a certain sentence, and uttering another sentence would bring him back to the present. Well, I like the idea of writing such a book. Meeting with Columbus gives the reader not only a chance to improve his English but also exposes him to the history of those important persons and their deeds together with added knowledge of Geography. The plot is perfect. I didn’t see any flaw in it. I liked the way you wrote down the whole story. It felt like even the author was enjoying while writing that story. I guess, it is because the author is pretty passionate about it. I can see the author’s passion for writing through writing style. Until reaching, the writing has become much more improved and it gets more interesting. I loved the way how his characters are performing expressively. They are not losing any thread. Whether it is the character the Boy Dan, he looked adorable. Besides that, his wisdom and the way he behaves toward those important people are also beyond appreciative. I liked the whole transferring to the past and behaving naturally like I was traveling with Dan. The moment when they met with the famous figure of the past, you woke my inner child who always wanted to know about the past explorers and their adventures. So, I guess, it was my favorite part. From Author’s perspective FIRST IMPRESSION - What was my overall take on the chapter after reading it? I loved it. This is all I have to say for now., the plot was perfect. It is ready to be published. The readers are going to love this adventure of the past for sure. SENSITIVITY - Is there anything that offended you in any way? Nope, it didn’t include any offensive stuff. I admire the writing be published in my opinion.